---  peer comments and critiques. for this activity, i chose to comment on my friend jadelyn's post! i had originally seen her in the creative process of making these shots since we were at the same location, and i was really curious as to how they turned out in the final version. so, i checked out her blog! aaaandd.... they were great! as i expected, they came out really nicely.  you go jadelyn! ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧ however, i did feel like somethings could have been improved on. the first shot i selected to comment on, for example, felt a bit unstable towards the end, as it drifted from the altercation taking place and places more of the focus on her shoulder. This could, however, be kept in if it led to a matching transition, but overall i don't think that was the intentional way to end the scene. the rest, however, really made me feel like i was actually there as an altercation was taking place! the natural movement of the camera following the subject as she walks give...